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How do you do it?
I need to know.
I see your true colors,
Though you don't let them show.

I know you like I know myself.
You run through my veins with pain and doubt.
I hate you to be here,
Though I can't live without.

How did you do it?
No one ever before...
I hate you with a passion,
But when you leave, I become so sore.

Why couldn't I tell you?
I geuss I thought I would degrade.
Now that your gone, with nothing to look back on,
not even a single date.

I know that you were hers.
But when she went away,
You opened up a door,
And you asked me to stay.

Why didn't I take your offer?
I regret it day by day.
I really think I loved you.
But I never had the courage to say.
©2004-2010 ~care-barechik15
:iconcare-barechik15:

Author's Comments

i suppose i had my chance
but i didnt take it

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:iconbandit420:
oh i love it!!:clap:

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:iconcare-barechik15:
THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!
thats great!

that old comment just fixed a bad day at work!
lol
thanx

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I guess I could try it one more time.
:iconk-catch:
wow, i really like this poem. very good :+fav:
:iconcare-barechik15:
thanx
i didnt think anybody looked back that far
lol
but thanx!

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:iconkelseypickles:
Oh my goodness you have no idea how much we have in common! What you said before your poem and your poem is almost like you were reading my mind! Yikes! Anyways, great job! :-D :+favlove:
:iconcare-barechik15:
hehe:giggle: lol yea that happens alot with my poems
i think you were just reading the right poem at the right time
ty

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I guess I could try it one more time.
:iconannalea09:
wow O.O
awesome. that is really good. you had great flow and the rhyme scheme is awesome. great job.

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Much Love-
Me
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Real friends are the ones that sees your tears before they even fall from your eyes.
:iconcare-barechik15:
thanx!!

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I guess I could try it one more time.
:iconannalea09:
hmm mm, no problem
:hug:
:lol:

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Much Love-
Me
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Real friends are the ones that sees your tears before they even fall from your eyes.
:iconfairiequeen:
that's really nice hey i tried to help but it didn't work

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